Comments on: From De Vaults: Selfstalk Blogtrawl No. 2

By: Ryan Sproull

Ryan Sproull — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 21:28:29 +0000

In my defence, I was quite drunk and a little insane at the time. I think. Did you trawl this up from "I Strongly Suggest You Fuck Off, Thanks" or whatever it was?

By: Tama_Boyle

Tama_Boyle — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 21:15:22 +0000

So it was a short story with line breaks. Well done. I think you'll find there's more to writing poetry than arbitrarily deciding to hit "enter" every few syllables. And it's "Your defect, we correct."

By: Ryan Sproull

Ryan Sproull — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 20:46:07 +0000

Pretty sure I had line breaks in my poorly written original, Mr Boyle OR SHOULD I SAY FOX NEWS.

"You penned, we amend." Is likely to be the slogan of THAT news network. Or, "You write verse, we perverse." We HELL OF perverse.

By: Roxane

Roxane — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 21:58:39 +0000

Hey girls, its time. Ready? Lets do it: mobile; hairstyle; lingerie; PDA; black dress; necklas; camera; push-up bra; braclet; jacket; shot glass; backstage pass; headband; sun tan; mini skirt; boyfriend's shirt; music; lipstick; scoop-neck; body check, time for fun, sexy one! Its time to make up and get busy. Wake up! Its time to make up, get down and get busy. Make up with thin lizzy! Thin lizzy! Ah Ha thin lizzy! Its time to make up.

Forgive my translation I realise Im no word wizard like you but I really did enjoy my cracker with cheese or cheese cracker if you like and so felt like sharing a little of that joy back with its instigator.

By: Roxane

Roxane — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 21:58:17 +0000

Mmm I was inspired by your words to grab myself a cracker with cheese, unfortuantly we only had the big block yellow stuff on which you save $1.95 with a onecard, which although perhaps if cash was used and depending on other items costs within the same shopping trip, more savings may occur due to rounding… but anyhow as I ate my cracker with big block yellow cheese I got thinking of good cheese, such as blue vein smegma, cumd'in chedder and oh you know the good stuff, this lead me to think of sex. Great Minds huh buddy as I see your cheesy poetry let you to recall a blue verse of your own… anyhow Im wasting the chalk so to speak I wanted to share an old verse I recalled. The verse is from the yearly autum mating rituals of the Denmarkians and still practiced by the cheese husslers of Zealand, for its performance the men rub self-made cheese on their genitals which they waggle whilst bellowing the following verse at their desired mate/s